Sunday, September 9, 2007

Bad Grammar from the Associated Press

In a story filed by Ron Fournier from Nashua, NH:
(Nashua, N.H.) — In a raw populist appeal, Democrat John Edwards on Saturday accused presidential rival Hillary Rodham Clinton of defending a lobbyist-driven political system that is "rigged against regular Americans" and killed her plan for universal health care.
A classic case of the worst error in grammar: a lack of agreement between subject and verb. Who or what "killed her plan"? Was it John Edwards? Or was it a lobbyist-drivien political system? There is no logical way to tell. Human intuition would probably lead to the former, which is a person and not an abstraction, as the subject of the last verb. But the difficultly could easily be remedied by placing a comma before the word "and."

It's hard to understand why so many people these days are allergic to punctuation.

Saturday, September 1, 2007

Gender neutrality advances slightly

The news today from Emerson College in Boston is not really that radical.
But it still represents a practical application of Judith Butler's philosphy.